Thread:Muhammedmco/@comment-36965940-20190408120035/@comment-36965940-20190416095455

Gosh, man. This stuff's long. I'm still going through Chapter 1, for the love of god.

But since I'd probably be finished with reading this in... a bit, I'll say that you seem to have definitely gotten the hang of things. The description and dialogue're pretty good; definitely not something to cringe at like I often see.

Shadow's especially interesting, too.